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Old 10-01-2013, 02:00 AM   #19
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We can’t love, marriage fails, it’s prophecy
It slams shut, we’re hand cuffed by fairytale philosophies

slick wording, rhythm was dope too


I’m not strong, I’m not tough, I’m not calm, I’m not what
She’d call love, I’m washed up, I’m all but
Forgotten

this too. it's not just your multis, it's how you use em. nah mean. I like pieces like this from you, more targeted, meaningful. plus your writing is always fun to read, not many people I can say that about. keep it coming
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