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Ama, have to get on my comp to feed this...be back shortly

Edit.

ok so im not gonna pretend that know who is who..im not that good at spotting styles or certain
things certain writers do...tbh this is the most ive been active in the OM ever..so if anything ama get this wrong lol
but I read both verse. first verse seemed sporadic fast paced...im ean the scheme did...you rhymed every which way
with a gang of vocabulary and wordplay...I would say this is you split(sorry if wrong) as your style fits that description for me...atleast
the few OM's ive read from you and fed. you have a unique way of telling a story with such an abstract touch to it....tbh
that's where im trying to get to...you seemed to do very well in this piece..enjoyed that aspect of it. pop culture can be a motherfucker
I thought you where at your best when you where mentioned all that...from the start to the cubicle sloths part...that shit was outstanding bro...great work.

second verse wasn't as cryptic as the first one..felt a bit more direct with your words...still had some dope metaphors and word use through out...vocab on point..all of that ws there I just felt like you presented your writing in a moer direct way..i guess easier to read..not taking anything away from scheme and complexity. thought you had a steady flow that carried the story very nicely..man you had a lot of depth to this piece I mean just this phrase alone stood out as im typing its still with me.."clockwork for bread...spread another crack on his face"
I mean godam that shit rings...its rings man lol very cool imagery and depth in just that alone....perfect example of what this verse was littered with...


great collab guys.