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your style is a cross between poetry, topicals, and prose. it always makes it hard to vote on in league battles, because it isnt always technically/ mechanically killer. but in terms of quality of writing, no doubt you are a very skilled writer.

the last stanza was killer. 'families grow in inches'. sometimes your writing sounds cliche, like "bathing in filth, cleaning a truth-soaked trend" sounds like a overdramatic contradiction just for the hell of it. Whoever thought of the idea of the cliche was the biggest faggot ever, though.

Good shit man. Very detailed/ acute description that shows you work with words well... maybe my advice would be to remove some of the ambiguity from your figurative language. just nitpicking

keep keyin