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Old 09-30-2013, 12:31 AM   #10
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This was dope as fuck with the contrasting styles lol
vivid yours was a very strong verse technically speaking complex schemes good vocab but the story itself suffered ever so slightly because of it.
inno you also had a strong verse but more on the story line an other types of techniques. The story stood out to me because of the repetition and poetic style you incorporated.
Both were great drops just complete opposites lol
Normally I would go with the poetic drop because of personal preference but vicissitudes drop was so sound technical use I gotta vote for him this time.
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