Zenland
Fast fowarded scene told under a minute. Adrenaline rushed verse. The flow was off the meters. Verse was up and runninv on all clinders from the jump
Showed philosophy, comedy, in a few line span. Not many can sprint with you,
Rawn MD
Reply cut him in half" almost warranted you the victory. The metaphor would've been ill jf only you wouldve tackled the triggering issuez . A lack of connection was there - youcut yourself in half - by not sewing the fleshy details. This was too helicopter heist in inhavana for me.
Cool battle
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