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Old 09-29-2013, 05:22 PM   #14
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Well this was a good battle...although some voted focus on RHYMING
I quite enjoyed Scripters verse due to creative usage of writing
which the league is about sadly you didn't take it beyond what it started out as
the flow of the piece was great thpugh I like tje fibonacci name drop
you performed quite adequately for not writing more
YDK...you did a great job as well you captured what Scripter chose not to
making the piece carry a more...resonating feel in my mind
you added some character which goes a long way
..nice work fellas but Ima have to go with YDK
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