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Old 09-29-2013, 04:38 PM   #11
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I'm on my phone soooooooo my votes will be short and sweet

Atheist your verse was interesting for what it was
More of a descriptive intro more than anything
Had it been finished I would have enjoyed where you took it
on the other hand.
Patrown brought a more thorough analysis of what he wrote
which is good because he kept it lengthed out for the battle
Keeping it competitive enough to enjoy while using the best of his skill
this vote is simple...Patrown


but being that its the first week and the beginning of the league
I say take this as a by..and bring your A game next week
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