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Old 09-29-2013, 10:24 AM   #13
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You both really went off on this with two completely different styles. Split you have the most weird unique off kiltered style I've ever seen but you make it work somehow. I really liked how you set the tone with this one

I'm a man of many a modicum of non-inclinations.Bad erotica finder comma odd fascinations, buyer-product of conglomeration,Gattaca, monocoque carbon, fiber-optic exoneration.Nice to be sad as-salamu alaykum. We all fall prey to our east.And the night is silent enough. ZzzQuil, my voicemail has finally peaked.So. Peaceful. These finer points... point to nil.Still. To each.Enlightenment has lightened up, gotten more hospitablefor all of u (sic) patience. Multi-omnivore autonomization.Decay and degrade. The sign of things to come, riding the waves in,Dry off your paws as you sink em in for any drops spilled in the basin.

^^this part was bananas

Certain, don't know mm if I've read to much from you but what I have I liked. This was top notch, nice smooth easy read with a lot of great concepts and even better execution, not gunna quote from you because I started picking lines to quote and damn near quoted the whole thing lol.

Good stuff guys
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