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e11even · 09-29-2013, 06:14 AM

@Vulgar that was some bomb ass feed btw.

Split- Muthafuckin damn. I think this verse was phenomenally bizarre, and of exploding
thought. So many ideas and inlets of lyrical design just made this a wtf piece. I'm gonna
read this a few more times just to get that impression back again. Great vocab. That
second half was a killer.

"Nice to be sad as-salamu alaykum. We all fall prey to our east." <- i was like
"damn."

Certain- This was a piece that was closer to earth and something that I could grasp easier. Flowed well after the first few lines and really got into a functioning barrage of solid thoughts and well placed words. I really enjoyed the suggestions in the different argruments... felt like I was in a blunt cipher having fucked up conversations.

This emaciated vagrant knows breakfast ends at 10:30,
and lunch usually doesn't happen at all.
Slow drip. Sodium Pentothal. "I had the loneliest pedagogue.
She'd expose me to metacogs and hold me while getting off,
but I wasn't fucked until now."<- fucking dope.

you guys inspire.

09-29-2013, 06:14 AM	#11
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	@Vulgar that was some bomb ass feed btw. Split- Muthafuckin damn. I think this verse was phenomenally bizarre, and of exploding thought. So many ideas and inlets of lyrical design just made this a wtf piece. I'm gonna read this a few more times just to get that impression back again. Great vocab. That second half was a killer. "Nice to be sad as-salamu alaykum. We all fall prey to our east." <- i was like "damn." Certain- This was a piece that was closer to earth and something that I could grasp easier. Flowed well after the first few lines and really got into a functioning barrage of solid thoughts and well placed words. I really enjoyed the suggestions in the different argruments... felt like I was in a blunt cipher having fucked up conversations. This emaciated vagrant knows breakfast ends at 10:30, and lunch usually doesn't happen at all. Slow drip. Sodium Pentothal. "I had the loneliest pedagogue. She'd expose me to metacogs and hold me while getting off, but I wasn't fucked until now."<- fucking dope. you guys inspire. __________________ Ahem.