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Old 09-28-2013, 12:46 PM   #11
Vulgar
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UNFUKWITABLE - lol, this was nicely done. Light, to the point, slightly humorous. Didn't take itself too seriously. Hit the topic. Not the best strategy considering who your opponent is, but it's an enjoyable verse.

dead man - Hah, simplistic and sick. Good approach, and I liked the way you ended it differently than I would've thought. The insectarium part impressed me most because you led up to it with a cool head, no foreshadowing. The mention of it told me you thought about this theme a lot before you decided where to place your hat and call it a day.

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