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Old 09-27-2013, 05:22 PM   #4
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hahahah nassty battle. Unfukwitable I've never read but his shit was dope. Fantastic story with an up and down cadence to engage the reader. I thought the beginning rhyme scheme was pretty out there and flowed real well. Thanks for the story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Black's story was nasty as fuck. I've never really seen black do a story like that usually it's on some subconscious mindfuck swag but it was masterfully worded. The descriptions like Dallas district 1, his wife burning to death, dung beetle was sick. Ending was lmao nice. Both great stories but black came out on top here.

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