Zenland's verse was pitch perfect. The rhyming/schemes were some of the smoothest I've read in a topical/open mic in quite awhile, and some portions of the language were absolutely beautiful and poetic. A great verse, one to be proud of.
Rawn was solid in his mechanics but corny in multiple facets. His entire conceit was corny, as were most of the metaphors or attempts at creativity. Very sterile and dry to me.
I'll remember Zenland's verse, I won't remember Rawns.
v/ Zenland
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