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Old 09-27-2013, 01:48 PM   #6
Zen
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Another dope battle.

Vivid- Very dope showing. I can tell from this piece you could up surprising some people this season. Excellent inner rhymes created a flow that was slick as hell. Very impressive. The story progression seemed to be lacking a bit in my opinion but your style made this a very interesting read. Good drop.

Inno- Nice. One of the best pieces I've read from you. The beginning set up the scene very well but what made this piece really stick out to me were the 'out of tune' lines to the very end. Very cool reading that shit and it was slick man. Great showing.

This battle is a tough one to vote on and I think it's pretty close. Although Inno's my boy I gotta give my vote to Vivid on this one. Great battle and this could go either way.
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