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Old 02-12-2013, 09:27 PM   #4
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I like the imagery a lot. This topic/storyline you were following had strong potential for a collab. The verse leaves me wanting more, but hey, what can you do. The structure is odd to me, but I'll accept as a personal problem/preference. The wording here was great, very clear and concise, perfect for a storyline. All in all, i enjoy the piece. I'll add my favorite line(s) riiiiiiight here:

Plugged into his mic jack he fights back, words alone can destroy the demons He deploys his freedom of speech and defeats em with the voice of reason
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