[Aesthetic]

Vulgar:

Pollen decays, it's what it's meant to do
we thought the mortar within Solomon's Gate inseparable


Absolutely Fuckin sick.

coroners raise foggy glasses of bourbon to our sprawling debts
accosted flesh, the darker depths of the neck help in determining the cause of death

Drop it man, your the shit; got it.

who tried to own a stretch - where the Incisive burn the feeble
Suddenly, righteous turns to peaceful:
only in the case of scientific dictatorships via hypodermic needles

Your not done? siiick!

Let the mighty anthem commemorate
'cause if the world ends, then phytoplankton can celebrate

Well man, I loved it; had a little trouble seeing the "apocolypse vibe." Mostly felt like a hip-hop rapture, fucking everytopic in the world up with abstract string theories and literal translations.

You basically blew my mind with the verse and I forgot what the picture was.


Adonis:

Dirt air and warfare; Years in the making,
Glistening glare of acid cascading,
Earth's been a gamble... Now pay up,

Perfect flow, im digging it.

Be damned and enslaved or Rich in plush estates...

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
A+

Meanwhile; earth spun; drifting afar,
The welded bond once shared, was ripped apart,
insecurity's stripped and scarred,
The Hammer – Lives in hearts,
Mortal Paradox, the anvil left the dock...

Over my head, enjoyed what little I could grasp of the words nonetheless.


Dirt air floating; ash made including Jesus,
The best known thesis is 'save the best for last',
Understand past was once futures shoot of craps,
But more Tobacco then Oxygen created a relapse.
Dark and musky, the forecast is Cloudy,
So touchy, because the subject's you abruptly,

I feel like this shouldn't have been included for some reason.

Living is fine; but consequences will bind,
So when the coffin needs one nail, I promise she's mine,
Hammer is heart: remember Light and Dark?

I feel a large amount of love towards this right here man, more please.

No prime median, No happy ending of massage,
Just Gotham's Filth as an attractive mirage,
Today's visage is... Earth is mom,
Yet the barrage of feet pierce her skirt and arm,
War was bombed as guns were palmed,
Knives were flung in the backs of young you mourn,
Earth filled with gas instead of fueling corn.
Such Irony: Seeds never reaped what they sowed,
Instead, elders made a world of distaste and mold,
Building Monoliths to gods instead of nurturing nature,
Death in betrayal... A man disguised but was a virtuous savior.

Sun blackened. Blood Moon
What happened??

~Earth's Tomb~

'We' Created you in love, except your fate,
And Thank You for teaching...
We aren't perfect God's.

Asphyxiate

To sum this up it was a very interesting read keeping right up with Vulgars A+ verse. You addressed more issues and were very critical about the direction not only peice was going but like, the world to..

very very very happy I read yalls drop.


V/Adonis

You had a lot more to say and I respect that, not only in the length of your piece but each bar in it's own.

Vulgar had an all around better game though and I would have voted for him if he put more emotion into it rather intellectuallism; you came a few words away from a win. For the record I enjoyed your verse a hell of a lot more.