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Old 09-26-2013, 11:29 PM   #11
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Vulgar

your ability to puttogther such intricate word play and vocab aong side a smooth fucking read is amazing to me. I mean that is what really stands out..ilike I read this so easily it was effortless to do so..you really put together some dope imagery with your detail content I mean it was dope to read man...marveled at your skills son.

Adonis

that poetic style you got I want. but seriously your story telling along side your unique style is dope to watch bro...this was no different..chalked full of imagery through out this piece..you painted the scene and thep ic pefect. you molded a well crafted story around what you had...felt like your story had a bit more emotion than vulgars...prolly the language..that poetic style beckons that shit lol..


overall

pretty even tbh both did there thing and plated to there strengths brining to the table to dope ass verse...both did an excellent job with the pic..felt like vulgar did a more narrative laid back type of deal where as Adonis put a bit more emotion in his words...both painted the scene equally dope. for me ama go with vulgar...felt like both did an excellent job but the vulg did an nice job with his shit...reading both twice I gotta say vulgars lingers a bit more with me so that's why I cast my vote to him.

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