[Adonis]

Let's start with script - I actually really enjoyed this verse. The immagery and feel to the entire verse was damn near serene. The wordin crisp aside from "peacefully/hopiing key". That bar had a break in it, I mean the tense fucked up or something. Other then that, I thought everything worked. I've never been a strong advicit of "true rhymes" because I how I talk I make things rhyme that others wouldn't. So this verse to me in a nut shell, hit the topic on its head, had solid meaning and dope imagery with decent to average flow. All in all I love the writers voice I guess.

YDK - solid verse. I enjoyed the story even if I felt it to be short and I really enjoyed the ending. And if I can be honest, you probably saved the W with that final bar. To me, with the final statement you brought the verse full circle with the photo, which is tough, very tough to do. So how could I not vote for you??

V/ YDK.

Vvery close for me, while I enjoyed scripters a bit more stylistally, YD just had the more complete verse. If Script had maybe made the verse a bit longer, or even took a extra day to pefect the schemes and thoughts behind the bars he would have had the easy win from me. Dope battle tho