Quote:
Originally Posted by Zenland
Once along this land that is now a prison
Outside of its dreams…trying to keep hopes wisdom
And no one here lie’s…we just play pretend
We make believe we are fine in the system
To no end
^^True shit here.
I liked this. You brought that poetic style that I like to see from you and performed it well for the most part. If I have one complaint it would be the a/b rhyme scheme of this. It fucked up reading it because I'm used to reading a/a, but as a poem this is beautiful and well done. Props @ Innovator. |
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Zenland
Will rtf.
But yo the scheme is like that becuase its a specific type of poem I cant remember which one. It was for a league...which by the way was up against @
Vulgar.
Thank man preciate the time taken...send me a link to anything you've posted and ill feed it like Seymore! !!