Boredom
when I make a lip ring it’s w/ a right hook leavin goof’s n lames embarrassed
u just have a lip ring that screams "I’m as gay as orcs fascination w/ antonio banderas"
-- most agressive punch
u’ve bin dickrode for ever. It’s pathetic cuz I’ve always thought this kid was a fag
who’se text career has been more of an on going joke than any of bag’s video mags
-- lackluster, but still a punch
back in the day no one’d vote for u, so u started to copy legends n u know it’s true
archive had enough of u digging through those n biting concepts...this is me exposing u
-- good personal... could have capitalized with better punch
Good verse. You need to manage flow and content more consistently. You also should cram more hard hits in these shorter line battles...
Arch
Your verses shouldn't be shared. When it comes to rap's elements, we know B's impaired
It's known that any charts you see Boron are always made up solely of squares
-- very solid punch.
Your girl refuses to even touch you. The lack of boning can't be ignored Kid
When you try to hit your broad's defense rivals a Mayweather performance
-- kinda funny
This game nerd's sex life's in a rut. When it comes to that special bond, it sucks
Shit... if you ask his 'XY'... it's cuz he'd rather play one of those Pokemons than fuck
-- good punch. the arrangement of it was solid imo
Not immaculate, but a sharper and harder verse. Better flow, and those few bangers laid in there did some damage.
MVGT Arch
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Ahem.
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