haha.. well done. im always impressed a girl can scheme this well lol. u probly don't like hearing that but its just truth. i really don't know wtf u were rhyming about for the most part but i enjoyed the ride?? "finest tree" was original and made me smile. not toooo sure what else to say about this... it was a tad all over the place. being the one who gets the most shit for this take my advice.. although u CAN scheme the fuck outt of things its not always the best route to go. don't be a slave to the rhyme.. u obviously have some thoughts going around ur head... write those down and flow around them, not the opposite... thats what i do, and now everyone hates me. ahah jk but u know what i mean right?
stay up ali, ur good shit
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