02-12-2013, 11:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Witty
Yo this was good but I felt your topic was a little weak, you were original I will give you that, and the flow was pretty cool, never really lost track...I felt the ending was perhaps distasteful but that is just personal opinion, it was well written and an enjoyable read. Keep writing bro.
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