I gotta be honest first couple lines flew right by me...but that could be the wording because through out this I was a bit misplaced. great word use..felt like at times you just used words to rhyme tho...didn't really have a direction at times..just all out rhyming which is cool and I guess I cant take this for a topical..feels more like a SnF flex type of piece sprinkled with some cool ideas that when developed could be some HOF type of shit...but this cool man nothing really outrages but I read it through...gotta count or something.
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