I love the title ...
If im being honest the Rhyme scemes word on point at times , simple at others and too stretched once in awhile ( this could be trying to read in paragraph form though )
Loved the danzig reference , most prob don't get it or don't know who glen danzig is ..
The subtleness was summed up best by irony with feta drizzled... old sports injury sounds very familiar, I'm just trying to put two and two together but my feeble mind just can't
I read and didn't hate it
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