That was a delicious piece. Not going to quote from either as there were not many lines worth overlooking. Very enjoyable first read from you Kaeo. I love the way you formatted your multies throughout and the way they transitioned from one another. Your depiction of the general tone of this piece was nice. Good angle pulled off well. Gittity. Vulgar you sexed it up as well. One of my fav from you recently. Doing what you do best, loved it.
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