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Old 09-20-2013, 09:43 AM   #2
Zen
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Kaeo Seru

Whoever said i was a beast, i apologize, they lied
The Umbrella corp. Fashioned these genetics of mine
Or so it would seem, being trapped in the hive
Has me prejudiciously attacking any action benign

dope way to start off the verse there.

Scrying hopes of a lay man describing ghosts
Still chasing hip hop and depicting its isotopes
Wearing platemail in a storm addicted to lightning bolts
Eyeing throats to snatch i envision a lion's scope
As i engulf, with wrath, any victim that i approach
^^Favorite section of your portion. Sick man.

Vulgar

It’s make or break for the maker, pay your dues or play your deuce
in this grandiose chessboard of life us players move, every occasion is déjà vu
Steadily pacing to De La tunes, as clouds assume a deadly matrix through gray monsoons
we see chaotic colors, like the inherent vagueness of Trayvon truths
Don’t blame the spirits of darkness if the creatures of night have forsaken you
^^Nicely worded bars to get your meaning across here. Dope.

I could honestly quote the rest of your piece. Very dope shit.

Both of you meshed together very well. You each have a similar style in my opinion and both of you showed just how dope you both are without overwhelming one another. Great collab fellas.
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