the more abstract approach give this a poetic vibe. had a very distinct flow to it.. too short IMO I would've liked to see this developed more to get a better sense of the images displayed before us. never-the-less I am enjoying trying to decipher this piece. I've read it 3x so far I'm sure i will read it a few more times b4 this post is actually posted. thank you for your contribution good sir
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