This felt a bit fractured, perhaps because of the presentation more than the words. But there was a lot to really like. The loose collection of thoughts and unstructured rhymes will fit in well here. I liked this most:
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all that is a dream tho. lived glimpses, dismembered rememberances, lived feet first while my inner devils inched in. won W's til they L'd, laughing at how she clenched it, drenchin... shit... tissue couldn't soak it all in, so I struggle to forget this pinchin mistress.
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The Art of Writing League will be an interesting challenge for you, as you'll be asked to stay more on a single topic. This being the only thing I've read by you, it seems unfair to say I know your style.