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Originally Posted by KnowP

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
I see what you're going for here. Could've been worded better, not terrible, but pretty simple.
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
I liked this. Nice wordplay with Yew, and a personal.
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
This is ok.
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
Ehhh. 'String' is really only a football term. Concept is funny, but meh.
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson
Wasn't feeling this as a closer. Should've had either your 2nd or 3rd bar as the closer.

Originally Posted by Apex

damn did now u dropped, here's a quick 10




Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
Ha. Bit of a chuckle, not too hard hitting though.
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
Unless this is true...no.
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
Eh....personal, ok. But not too hard hitting, worded poorly.
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
Chuckle at the end, but not a hard hitter. Justin Tuck eats Subway footlongs, does that make him a faggot?
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower
Ehhh. Not a great closer.


blah, quick 1
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=14035

Both of you had ehh verses. Need to work on wording them effectively and executing the final punch. With shortbar, you really want to attack your opponent in each line. Can't really have a setup and then punch, unless the punch is a haymaker. Decent battle I guess.

Vote - KnowP

He was more direct and his punches were a bit more hard hitting.