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Originally Posted by Boredom

u vs me is not fair, and it's obv ur shook cause son
i'll give amateur of his gravesite just to prove u are that and will be put in one
Ok, but worded horribly.
dawg i'm beasting and u can trust that all believe me
u don't even have the buzz of a fly on the wall, so for me to squash u is easy
Pretty simple concept. I guess it hits, but barely.
u never get pussy u ugly fucker, u can count he's on the run
cuz if a bitch ever get's ammonia she would want to drown her self in some
His name is ammo. This is a miss for me.
ur ya own worse enemy, a lame to soft to brawl
it's ironic how u tried to throw shots at AK but ended up w/ ur brains on the wall
Better. Probably my fav so far, which doesn't say much.
i'm catchin this dub w/ EASE, that is something u can bet g
no way i'm losing to a whack noob whose lost every battle he's been in on netcees
Personal ok. Jab at best.

light work.

You're H.McCoy? Fgt you've been duckin me forever. Prob better off. Not a great verse dude. Simple concepts and decent at best execution. Work on your wording and get more creative.

Originally Posted by Ammo

i'll take a 2x4 to boredom and brag about how i board him,
then if he say i didn't, i'll do it again while his bitch recordin,
Wordplay? I guess? Lackluster opener, worded horribly.
yea i may not be the best, but you said you'd help me,
you couldn't help me if i was on a 10 story bout to make the street gory,
Doesn't rhyme, and no....
end of story, you bore me, better yet go ahead ya bitch adore me,
i'll send you a poster and custom made 40 with my pic and your sis on it fuckin with funny faces just to be corny,
Holy filler. Just rhyming words gets you nowhere in battling.
when it's all said and done you gonna die a horrible death,
final destination embedded in me says your gonna turn left,
What a punch....he's gonna turn left...............
which ain't right, cause it will end you up on a milk carton easily,
missing, but nobody cared about board, just card board & vitamin D
No.

You need to work on pretty much everything man. You had no concepts or punches, and were just making statements. Get aggressive. I read boredoms verse and thought it was poor, then read yours and you took an even bigger step down. Keep at it though.

Vote - Boredom