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Old 09-17-2013, 06:13 PM   #7
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I remember the first verse from the cypher I do believe
either that or you dropped it before under another title
regardless it's good work
the second section is what piqued my interest
the ending of that whole thing was the icing on the cake
nice work all around, you have come quite a long way
keep writing
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