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Old 09-17-2013, 05:58 PM   #17
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The first section of this was straight flames
next you picked up with some sick visuals and metaphors
kept it moving with some strong ass rhyme schemes
then ended it with a nod to one of the great horror stories
slick shit all around, I enjoyed the guano
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