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Old 09-17-2013, 05:54 PM   #18
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this was very entertaining the flow was on point
as well as your vocabulary choice

really enjoyed the first half then the middle switched it up
I enjoyed the pantomime fingers and all that other stuff
very nice work all around though my dude
keep writing
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