shit's so dope. i loved the last line, it's dropped perfectly.
Puked on the board cause I'm sick with the punchlines, my new jot just soars like it was stricken with bug bites.
I’m that fly, it takes a real dick to explain puns, and that’s why I make ya feel like shit when I say one.
fav section here. it transitioned flawlessly. idk what it is about tonight but i keep gettin inspired to jot some shit down. maybe next time i'll actually take my time before droppin on the open mic. i usually just write what comes to mind and press send. that just gave me an idea for a line right there. so i'll be back with more
thanks for the read
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Originally Posted by Objective
Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.
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