lol i dunno if this is exactly swag an flow...more like an aggressive topical battle IMO...some of the ways y'all worded stuff kinda threw me off hahaha but all the same it was definitely a worthwhile read...i think more direct vocabulary woulda made this one better, maybe that's just me lol...
genocide, u had some tight stuff, but a lot of it seemed to be u just rhymin for the sake of rhymin...an with the really long lines, it didn't read as smooth as the schemes would normally make it...ironically, given my jewish heritage, i thought the swazstika boots line was probably the best one u had...
pent up, i know ur writing pretty well, so it was interesting to see u try ur hand at this...i thought the holdin ur pocket shit was probably ur best one, but it was also one of the bars where the wording kinda threw me off lol...the luck if u'd get to die off it part was actually pretty smooth...
vote-pent up...all in all, good read, like i said...i gave this to pent up cuz i thought he was more to the point...IMO a swag an flow battle should still have concepts that lead to direct statements, even if they're not punch lines PERSAY, they still should kinda have that format...good shit y'all...
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