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Old 09-14-2013, 06:03 PM   #4
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Uncertainty lies in the mind of a worried pastor concerned with laughter
valiant efforts only acknowledges heroes if they’re buried after
Whew
cells determines cancer, but growth should be exclusive to personality
depression becomes a dark path in which reduces its search for clarity
wow, pretty profound for you
u don’t want your skills measured by long faces with strong cases
you opt for the easy way out & end up getting the wrong praises
yessir
every action has consequences & you think morals teach the wise?
mortals need the light & the illusion of a higher power to grace us
I took this from two different bars but this was nice continuation and although I don't agree with your personal view that higher power is illusionary still good wording


This was a good piece that touched on various aspects of a downtrodden life. Wording here was good the tempo the vocab on point..
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