Mike, I see what you did with the twist of movie and shit. But while reading I just kept thinnking how nothin was likely in real life again, I get its a cartoonn, but that don't change my feelings. In the end you borrowed a story, which could be fine but I'm not a fan. The rhymes were a bit simple IMO and nothing was too complex, just safe. I guess I can feed more, but what I'm saying is I didn't like it much. True talk, sorry for being dickish if I am so...
Certain, you used your own name too much. But I loved the introspection aspect, a peer into the soul and mind. An editor, lynguist and man who strives to be the best at what he does. @
Certain serpent what name did you go by whilst battlingg fracture and corey?? I was around all those years myself. This topic actually brought me back the better days, before storrys became the norm which I'm not a fan of. I think all the verses I wrote this season safe the ant track, were written as a view in myself. I get that's not voter friendly, but you took it one step further and explaiined why you should be the champ. Dope concept all around, I was oriinally going to do the same thing and have 6 bars per week, then I got lazy rather procrastinated like an ass.
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Better writting style to me