Camp is elevating, based on his verse. I can tell he's making the progression from longbar. However, he just needs to get some better concepts and wording. Keep it up.
Defiant had some nice bars, like American pie,campaign and Olive branch. Didn't like the closer cuz it didnt rhyme. Nice verse overall though.
In the end, think defiant took this. sorry im so brief.
V/Defiant
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