I kinda digged your shit I mean from a critique view I wanna say I didn't like it cause of your vocab and stretches but I mean from the 3 songs I heard, I enjoyed it.
I died when you started spittin lynchin shit from wow.
Try to keep your bars about from the first length till now.
Never go over a measurement unless you bar it togethor with like multi rhymes.
Tell me about the moon, rain sun and stars Intergalactic raps from mars!
(Eminem) - See how he rhymes in 1 bar, kind of confusing concept; never tried explaining it.
Im sure you know what I am talking about and im probably not accrediting you to the fullest extent; jsut try and rhyme more without stretching and watch the nerd rap, very hard to get publicity, unless your rapping for game intro's.
Big words are hard to enunciate with syllables after stretching, only use them when the line is like; a few words tied off and you can still feel a pop and good sound.
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