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Originally Posted by Seyance
the back flips past is hat tricks black lips scheme has been done to death. probably one of known as one of the easiest multi sets around, very much like the similar take this fake is basic lame shit scheme.
when critiquing a verse.. one of the things i take into account is the difficulty of the craft. how hard was that to write? in similar way the judges critique say a diving competition, an easy dive would be safe and register a score, but would never be able to get a high score. a harder to complete dive has the possibility for a higher score.. but has it's own pitfalls when being so ambitious.
edit: stfu aero, me/pan vs you/rawn pinkslip forever?
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don't talk about
craft until you learn how to use the possessive apostrophe, plz.
and what you're basically saying is you sit there and look at how long the guy must have lamented over contrived rhyme schemes. awesome, noble pursuit.
verse was tight.