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Old 09-10-2013, 10:10 PM   #7
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i have been waiting on one of these from you. dope as always, although certainly not your best battle rap verse. what neighbor quoted was also my favorite section of the verse - what you lacked here, i think, is the few standalone bars that are actual jaw-droppers you usually have in your works.

really enjoyed the voice you give to these. it feels almost omnipotent and that's what a battle rap verse should be.

thanks zy.


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