3. SETUP EFFECTIVENESS EXAMPLES:
(original: @Jah Homie)
I don't practice restraint when I put nick to the flame just to see which way the cracker crumbles.
(revision)
i dont practice restraint; see Nick catchin a break - that's how the cracker crumbles
(original: @Anonymous)
Develish lyrics, like I'm rapping through a cursed mic,
Fuck Writing raps I prefer the unrehearsed type
(revision)
got murdered in the past; off-the-top, my drops are savage guys
while their's are gettin re-hearsed - and put in the casket twice!