Really good. Dynamic rhyme schemes that don't end when you expect it, and very electrically charged. You are definitely a flag-bearer for the new generation of topicalists because of your flow manipulation, which is a no brainer as to why you're a standout.
Knew he had passed his prime so I threw him on past horizons
Viewing the crashing site and the beauty it catalyzes
Too much moving, we act in signs like students of acting
Commuting through hands and smiles like Nubian pantomimers
^Solid.
So I'm always solitary and alone the poems can rescue me
Boatloads of the recipe, coke-nosed to suppress the beef
Patron, smoke, and some ecstasy, my own soul is repressing me
Own homes at the depths and I'm stone cold like it's wrestling
^You seem to hit your stride best with these 4 line strings. Nice work. @
Nigma