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Old 09-10-2013, 01:16 PM   #7
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Enjoyed it a lot. The sudden build up to the very last thought was great, the small content worked for it well. Kind of minimalist, concise as possible style, it would be great to read a series of these very short odes to 'things' with a similar kind of introspective/sad ending for each.
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