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Old 02-10-2013, 12:46 AM   #16
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Originally Posted by King Keith View Post
Your lines are the weakest & mines go the hardest,
you're trash.... & I'm taking you out like Monday morning garbage.

That's what I came up with off the top.

What I want to know is, when you approach a battle against someone, how do you plan your verse(s) out? You brainstorm a bunch of concepts then write them out? I've been told my wording is a major issue.... from what I read from the example, it seems like as long as the two end words rhyme, everything is straight.

Speak. @ill nik-A @Bags

And Bags, are you done battling now that NC is down?

There's a chick who blows off on weekends, the whore gets fathered
she happens to be your trash, go take out monday mornings garbage
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