Incredibly short. It was fluid. It was not real lyrical or complex....but I suppose it did what it needed too.
You have untapped skill....you aren't aware of yet. I think you've grown complacent with your style because I've read your work for a long time and I can't really say I have seen any significant elevation.
Yes, many of dope text verses.....but nothing out of the ordinary of what id expect from you.
In my opinion its not enough to simply have a solid verse....it's got to be innovative and entertain each and every time.....when someone clicks on your piece....it should be unpredictable.
I'm not saying I am perfect or haven't fallen guilty to some of the same things....but for improvement purposes that's my two cents.
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