Ok so my vote will not match the effort you guys put into these verses so apologies but I'm on my mobile and trying too feed the nipper.
This was an amazing battle though slightly overwhelming in size. Both felt they could of been cut a little in places. The story telling from pent was sublime and kept me engaged through out which helped with some nice internals specifically in the opening verse. Flowed nice and was descriptive and interesting. Enjoyed the take on the concept and was a solid piece. Nigma came with his usual self making poetry engaging with some great abstract writing and with visuals painted picture perfect. You came with some really nice vocabulary in places and this helped with some nice rhyme schemes.
Where you differ for me was that I found pents flow really rolled of the younger where nigma came a tad choppy in places and I just didn't feel the flow in some areas specifically with the some what random changes in rhyme scheme in places.
For this I'm voting pent
Gl to both was a top class battle - pm me if you need me to elaborate anything you disagreed with and want more clarification
Peace
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