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Decibel · 09-06-2013, 01:22 AM

u vs me is not fair, and it's obv ur shook cause son
i'll give amateur of his gravesite just to prove u are that and will be put in one
Okay opener.. pretty straight forward
dawg i'm beasting and u can trust that all believe me
u don't even have the buzz of a fly on the wall, so for me to squash u is easy
Dig the concept here to be honest. good hit
u never get pussy u ugly fucker, u can count he's on the run
cuz if a bitch ever get's ammonia she would want to drown her self in some
lol
ur ya own worse enemy, a lame to soft to brawl
it's ironic how u tried to throw shots at AK but ended up w/ ur brains on the wall
Its direct.. but simple
i'm catchin this dub w/ EASE, that is something u can bet g
no way i'm losing to a whack noob whose lost every battle he's been in on netcees
Seems kinda slapped on for a closer.

Overall... pretty decent verse other than the closer. You came with some direct shots but simple, the Fly line was probably your best.

i'll take a 2x4 to boredom and brag about how i board him,
then if he say i didn't, i'll do it again while his bitch recordin,
This is a weak opener.
yea i may not be the best, but you said you'd help me,
you couldn't help me if i was on a 10 story bout to make the street gory,
I dont really get the direction of this
end of story, you bore me, better yet go ahead ya bitch adore me,
i'll send you a poster and custom made 40 with my pic and your sis on it fuckin with funny faces just to be corny,
stretched and just isn't a strong concept at all..
when it's all said and done you gonna die a horrible death,
final destination embedded in me says your gonna turn left,
Okay?
which ain't right, cause it will end you up on a milk carton easily,
missing, but nobody cared about board, just card board & vitamin D.
At least it was a good attempt but still not strong hitting

Overall: You need to work on reflecting some NP's or personals in your lines. You also need to work on not stretching it to death. Stay away from generic disses

Vote: Boredom pretty one sided.... harder hits/verse overall. Boredom... if he don't post links and you won.. I am not going to punish you for his actions.

09-06-2013, 01:22 AM	#11
Decibel Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 269 Battle Record: 2-3 Rep Power: 0	u vs me is not fair, and it's obv ur shook cause son i'll give amateur of his gravesite just to prove u are that and will be put in one Okay opener.. pretty straight forward dawg i'm beasting and u can trust that all believe me u don't even have the buzz of a fly on the wall, so for me to squash u is easy Dig the concept here to be honest. good hit u never get pussy u ugly fucker, u can count he's on the run cuz if a bitch ever get's ammonia she would want to drown her self in some lol ur ya own worse enemy, a lame to soft to brawl it's ironic how u tried to throw shots at AK but ended up w/ ur brains on the wall Its direct.. but simple i'm catchin this dub w/ EASE, that is something u can bet g no way i'm losing to a whack noob whose lost every battle he's been in on netcees Seems kinda slapped on for a closer. Overall... pretty decent verse other than the closer. You came with some direct shots but simple, the Fly line was probably your best. i'll take a 2x4 to boredom and brag about how i board him, then if he say i didn't, i'll do it again while his bitch recordin, This is a weak opener. yea i may not be the best, but you said you'd help me, you couldn't help me if i was on a 10 story bout to make the street gory, I dont really get the direction of this end of story, you bore me, better yet go ahead ya bitch adore me, i'll send you a poster and custom made 40 with my pic and your sis on it fuckin with funny faces just to be corny, stretched and just isn't a strong concept at all.. when it's all said and done you gonna die a horrible death, final destination embedded in me says your gonna turn left, Okay? which ain't right, cause it will end you up on a milk carton easily, missing, but nobody cared about board, just card board & vitamin D. At least it was a good attempt but still not strong hitting Overall: You need to work on reflecting some NP's or personals in your lines. You also need to work on not stretching it to death. Stay away from generic disses Vote: Boredom pretty one sided.... harder hits/verse overall. Boredom... if he don't post links and you won.. I am not going to punish you for his actions. __________________ ..:: Decibel ::..