split.
I thought your 3 for lines
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Symmetry abounds in the city street surroundings,
for now I live for me. Found between infinities, puddle-deep drowning ashore.
Loud for me is sound asleep, subtlety is a crowning mountain gorge.
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absolutely dope man. great start. great imagery in the first part of the verse I thought that shined the most for me...couple of lines felt forced or just didn't fit for me. the orchestrated line and the actually or not line..those felt weird for me..i think veritas said it best you have a real conceptual yet poetic slash abstract style...can I say this had very little flow lol..but that didn't matter you had the scheme and the vocab going so it didn't really matter for me...in the end your verse was cool man felt a bit too vague for me though..at times you seemed to just go off in no direction..but this shit was still some dope shit bro.
certain.
felt like you brought a more peaceful vibe to the collab...dunno split felt a bit sporadic but a good sporadic..felt the enrgy from his words..you came with a more laid back easy type of style...you didn't seem to stumble at all and the flow was just rivers of ill shit lol.. I mean the word choice was outstanding. felt like your direction was a bit easier to see for me..even though split had some ill imagery at times...you seemd to do it a bit better..
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But we're all aftermarket slaves, asking for a wage with no passion for the day.
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some profound words.