this faggot is the next r!can, asking for that ext left ur neck bleeding
and made this kill drawn out so it's only fitting i give u the pesci pen treatment
okay opener
ur completely irrelevant, so anything u've said i'll dead.
w/ one jab that'll take so much off ya top ur face will resemble veritas head
Decent stuff here.. nice
i'm on that mafioso shit, i won't even touch a gun
i'll just have u fitted w/ cement pajamas shor so ur body doesn't end up on one
okay
ur not a street fighter faggot, i'll leave ur jaw severed w/ a clever right
i don't need to shoryuken when i'll throw one haduken that will end ur life
personal... good jab
i'm a don w/ the keys, u couldn't type nice for u life kid
cause ur style is sooooooooooooooo under developed it's getting tyson excited.
lol... decent closer
Overal... decent stuff all around. nothing wow factor, however, decent hits all around
While am sat at home with nought to do, I browse these forums
cuz a quick keystyle in the BA's'all it takes to beat boredom
Get the concept and was a decent opener
ya punches are generic, bore's just a pre-writing alias lover
didn't just make a name for 'emself winning that tourney ...
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . he's made around 80 others
Cool little flip..
wants the #1 spot, but your mid tier bitch know your place
if you ever take the champ out, s'just means Nika's finally accepted a date
I get it. decent personal flip
& I know I missed the deadline, was due to your Mrs nightly visit's
man I could give a fuck if I'm late ... I'm too busy praying your wifey isn't
Decent flip on the ext. bullshit... good jab
I've got bare bars, your bars are just bare ... & heres the sad bit
Ive seen better w/p from my 3 year old daughters refrigerator magnets
Feel concept, however, just not strong
Overall... your good with concepts, decent jabs all around, and a good showing here. Went personal here and there, slacked on closer
Overall Vote: Close one but I think Shor edged this one out to be honest. Little harder hits with personal (aside the closer).
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