Bleak, wasn't really feeling your verse too much punch wise. They weren't bad, they weren't good. They were decent. If this was a key then it's pretty obvious. But either way, you could have hit much harder with them. The two namix references loses some fire, but the last one you used in your closer was better than the one two bars before. I wasn't feeling the S9 line & the wording is what takes from it. Decent verse overall but could have been better. Sharp, pretty surprising. You are definitely improving. Your lines were short, but that didn't take from the effectiveness of your punches. The only line that lacked was your closer, but the others were solid. Opener was nice & liked the Flacco line.
MVGT: Sharp Nine.
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